Friday, March 6, 2009

Burning Heart..

It feels as if.. 
someone is clenching my heart
shooting it with burning darts..
i cannot douse the fire burning
minute after minute pain is returning..
am helpless and weak
no place to go,where solace i can seek..
though hands are tightly tied
am still hurting their self pride..
heart is ticking like an old clock
any moment it seems,it will stop..
the person i held in this heart
is the one who,pain imparts..
but still i am to be blamed
by me,my heart could not be tamed..
i fell feeble and faint
so my heart is burning with no restraint..

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

I have experienced this kind of pain before, as have many others.
It goes deep, like cupid's arrows.
It isn't pleasent either, that pain we feel, but it shows that we have a heart, and that we care. Much love to you!

Maithili Desai said...

very well written.... it's evident that you seem to have faced the pain yourself.... indeed experience does hone the poets in ordinary people...